Cynthia,
Thank you for praising my writing !!
I am very glad to read your reply --- --- Yes ! Nowadays,
for me, writing sometings in English is becoming easier
than before. Everytime I write an e-mail to my dear Korean
friend living in Korea, I feel fine, because I can express
my mind in English to her easier than the first time we
exchanged a email each other !! I believe our friendship
becomes tight !
I
have convinced that your lessons and your comments are
making my writing skills in English improve. Your lessons
are sometimes very hard because every lesson has a lot
of work, but your lessons always offer me to challenge
to write somethings in English. Your lessons give me a
chance to write in English !
Your comments are always helpful for me. You make me be
a motivated student !!
You always encourage me to write. Your comments about
my grammatical errors make me get interested in grammar.
I always write down my errors you teach me on my own notebook,
and try not to make the same mistakes...( I hope..)
Still,
writing someting in English is a very hard task for me...
I have to care more about grammar, word choise...more,
more... to express my mind to you correctly as possible
as I can. Actually, it is now taking 40 minutes to write
this better....(Laugh!)
Thank
you, Cynthia !
I
realize that doing good works at this on-line writing
class is the best reply
to express my thanks to you ! As you praise my writing,
I am very happy now, and I can have a happy day, Today
!
Have
a great day !! See you on Lesson4/part3 !!
N,
Your student ...
Cynthia,
I just want to thank you for your feedback on a pile of
my journals I dumped on you in the last few days. Not
only are your comments encouraging as a mentor's, but
also they are interesting, thoughtful, and in many cases
thought-provoking. Before I signed on this "online"
writing class, I did not know what to expect. Now, I happily
surprised that I actually anticipate and enjoy working
on the writing assignments so far, especially, the journal
part, which I suspect that it may be something therapeutic.
It no doubt has a lot to do with your methodology and
hard work, for whick I am grateful. Q1: What is the difference
between a thought-provoking question and a provocative
question? I was told that both of them are good means
for an introduction in writing.
Hi
Cynthia: Thanks a lot again. I feel so good running home
at night just to read your comments and do my homework.
This course goes beyond my expectations, but also demands
more time of what I thought before joining the class.
Anyway, I'm getting crazy here because I'm not an expert
about computers and my printer doesn't work. I need to
keep going back and forward between this text and places
where the information is. I hope to fix this ASAP. The
Scavenger Hunt is very interesting! Give me a global vision
of the amount of information that I can get trough. Beside
this, the guidance is perfect and things run very easy.
What a brilliant idea! OK, time to work now.
Cynthia,
I want to thank you in many ways. Here are few examples.
Last week, I attended a two-day seminar for Business Writing
where I had an opportunity to truly appreciate the knowledge
you taught me in this class. For example, the habit of
journaling enabled me to write a few impromptu assignments
at the seminar at ease. Through this class, your teaching
has unlocked a hidden portal for me. This newly found
portal leading to a mysterious, fascinating world where
writing not only is an attainable skill but also an effective
means of improving reading. Because my newly discovered
passion in writing, I decided to form a plan to challenge
myself. Last Friday, I signed up for study English in
the College of San Mateo. It should not take too long
before I can obtain an AA there and then transfer to another
university for a Bachelor degree in English if I study
hard enough. And besides, I don't have to retake any class
that matches the ones in my biology degree and MBA program.
It's exciting for me because the last time I was in a
classroom as an student was more than 10 years ago. Thanks,
P.
Dear
Ms.Cynthia
Thank
you very much for your kind message and ask me about Part
3, home work.
I am today inWashington DC, for next two days and New
york for two more days for business trip and working with
our JAPANESE partners. I will be back to San Francisco
this Oakland-Tampa Bay superball weekend. Well I am keep
working these homework puzzles and questions and I will
report to you my score very soon. I love your class very
much and I will keep learning with your help. Thank you
very much for your help and I am very much appreciated
indeed. Thanks again.
Sincerely
yours,
S.I.
Dear
Cynthia,
I don't know what the other students in this class think.
But the longer I stay in your writing class, the more
I like it. Every time I get a new lesson from you, I start
to think what my opion is, what should I write to suppor
my opion, how to let you know my opion, use what tense,
what order of the sentences I shoule use.... I think about
it and then start to write. After writing , I put it away,
and wait until one week later, click it out and think
about it again. I really enjoy it. Then I send it to you
and wait for feedback. I am so glad that I can always
get positive and encouraging letters from you. Then I
think I am on the correct way. I will keep doing it. I
can improve. I am confident. I think writing is a very
important skill for my life. I think being positive and
encouraging is good. Of course a little bit negitive is
ok for me too. Or maybe you are worry about the budget
problem of the school. You know, it is life. I think everything
will be fine. Don't worry!
